This game overall is very good when you compare it to most the AVN's out there. That's pretty much the short version. Now for the long version. I absolutely love the main plotline of this AVN, it's something new and that's refreshing to see. As for me who plays these AVN's mainly for the plotlines, I do have some things that I wanted to be improved upon but I would never impose upon the author. I want to start this off with making sure that I really do think that this game is so good so the following things I'm about to discuss are just my preferences and not necessarily criticism in any way, shape, or form. Also I am aware that games like these MOSTLY target people who are looking for something to get off to so really these words mean nothing. The storyline itself is pretty good, the issue I have with it is that it's all done very quickly with not much room to bond the player/reader with the story's characters. The schedules were also off and it ruined the immersion that I had (vacation this weekend = a month I think, meet Angelo on Monday = also a month I think) so I distracted myself to not ruin it further for me. The girls were also pretty much on the player's nose most of the time because if you say/do something they like they'll immediately jump you on a relationship the next or few interactions later, in short there were no bonding over with them too aside from what's given to us readers which is mostly transitional months. So I think this lead to an overall a quick experience (I finished it in one day but that's not a bad thing).One thing's for sure though, Richard and Clark were some of the best characters in this particular genre of AVN's! I was stoked to see that another AVN managed to design likable males (well I get that Clark is gay but I meant in terms of natural sex). So overall I really liked this so far. Will I still be reading/playing the next chapters? Absolutely! Do I expect anything to change? Not really because it's hard enough to make an AVN let alone a lone dev and from the looks of it it's not the Dev's main source of income so it could be hard to balance everything. So absolutely no pressure, you're doing great Poopcicle!!! So that's about everything, a solid 4/5. Thank you for this adorable AVN Poopcicle!!! Have a nice day
Hey having a thing happen where the girls will have their problems and then the day after its the confession scene will happen then it will repeat all of them over and over, im literally just seeing it in repeat
I'm extremely flattered! I would love a Discord community for my game(s), but I just don't have the time to manage one myself. Not to mention I don't know the first thing about creating/managing a Discord server. Though if anyone wants to help, I'll happily accept it :)
That is very fair, I know how to set one up but not how to manage it. Thanks anyways haha, your game has been amazing so far.
Personally, I chose Tiffany lol, everyone is complaining they can't choose multiple girls but it makes the story more immersive. For your first VN, it is somehow the best ive played.. ever
this question has probably been asked a hundred times but if you get into a relationship with one girl dose that completely stop all possible relationships with the other girls?
well so im in jessica romance and idk how lol cause i even in the question of who you love i placed all the same and someone else for the ghost but well xD guess thats that xDD still i like her cause pokemon so i wont complain uwu
I'll look into this, but it might have something to do with the arbitrary limitations most phones put on app size. I'll be releasing a further compressed mobile version of part 1 soon and hopefully that will solve the issue.
I'm looking into breaking the game up into two parts while I work on chapter 9. I'll probably re-release a slightly more compressed version of the game now as part 1 in the coming weeks, and chapter 9 will be the beginning of part 2.
Hi! Is there a poly ending in the works? I'm hesitant to play a multi ending eroge VN without a Harem/Poly ending due to a personal issue with indeciciveness.
There is, but like I said in a previous comment, it won't be coming until later in development/story. For the time being, you'll have to choose one LI or none at all.
k, I'll prolly wait till the game is complete. It's nothing against your game as it is, but I just personally don't like having to "pick best girl" in my horny VNs.
Thank for your the comment, and I agree, 4gb is too much. I have been looking into spliting the game into two parts, as well as further compressing the game, so I hear you.
Thanks for the report. My emulator isn't catching that but I confirmed it's a problem on phones. I'll try and get a fix out for the public release for chapter 8.
I gotta say, this is actually really good, especially for your first VN. Also, you've definitely mastered Tiff's gremlin faces. They're freaking adorable
Android version here with a little issue. It doesnt fit the screen and the text lies on top of the images. During our first "session" with Tiffany it switches between full screen and small window.
This is a very positive story. Too bad it was so short on raie, but the time I spent was good. I hope your project develops well and I will be watching the process. All the best, hope for an imminent update !
Loved the game! Very fun. Good writing too. I like the character's personalities. I'm already getting attached to them, Hope we'll meet more. Will there be animation? Do you have a patreon page? Thanks for the game!
There reason the scene with Tiffany is not included is because I'm working on custom animated version of it. It should be included with the next update.
I don 't have a Patreon yet, I wanted to get more content out there to make it feel worthwhile for people to invest in my project.
Once I get more comfortable with the ins and outs of Ren'py (and have significantly more content) I'll make a build for android. Hopefully in a couple of versions from now.
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This game overall is very good when you compare it to most the AVN's out there. That's pretty much the short version. Now for the long version. I absolutely love the main plotline of this AVN, it's something new and that's refreshing to see. As for me who plays these AVN's mainly for the plotlines, I do have some things that I wanted to be improved upon but I would never impose upon the author. I want to start this off with making sure that I really do think that this game is so good so the following things I'm about to discuss are just my preferences and not necessarily criticism in any way, shape, or form. Also I am aware that games like these MOSTLY target people who are looking for something to get off to so really these words mean nothing. The storyline itself is pretty good, the issue I have with it is that it's all done very quickly with not much room to bond the player/reader with the story's characters. The schedules were also off and it ruined the immersion that I had (vacation this weekend = a month I think, meet Angelo on Monday = also a month I think) so I distracted myself to not ruin it further for me. The girls were also pretty much on the player's nose most of the time because if you say/do something they like they'll immediately jump you on a relationship the next or few interactions later, in short there were no bonding over with them too aside from what's given to us readers which is mostly transitional months. So I think this lead to an overall a quick experience (I finished it in one day but that's not a bad thing).One thing's for sure though, Richard and Clark were some of the best characters in this particular genre of AVN's! I was stoked to see that another AVN managed to design likable males (well I get that Clark is gay but I meant in terms of natural sex). So overall I really liked this so far. Will I still be reading/playing the next chapters? Absolutely! Do I expect anything to change? Not really because it's hard enough to make an AVN let alone a lone dev and from the looks of it it's not the Dev's main source of income so it could be hard to balance everything. So absolutely no pressure, you're doing great Poopcicle!!! So that's about everything, a solid 4/5. Thank you for this adorable AVN Poopcicle!!! Have a nice day
Thank you so much! I'm humbled by your understanding and patience 😁
All constructive criticism is valid! I appreciate all feedback.
Thank you for taking the time to read that lengthy comment. Here's hoping for the best for you! Have a good day.
I just played the game and it's wonderful! I love the story line and the scenes, I support you fully so please give it your best♥️.
Thank you so much!
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Hey having a thing happen where the girls will have their problems and then the day after its the confession scene will happen then it will repeat all of them over and over, im literally just seeing it in repeat
Hey there, sorry about the bug. Can you break down the choices you made for the game to start behaving that way?
hey sorry, it's these ones, the conclusion to each character comes straight after and then it repeats these after the third
Understood, but what are are the all of the choices you've made? I need to know how to replicate this to fix it.
If you'd like, you can email me at PoopcicleVN@gmail.com
Please make a Discord! I'll be here for future updates!
--and I wish to celebrate this wonderfully unique VN with others who've played it
I'm extremely flattered! I would love a Discord community for my game(s), but I just don't have the time to manage one myself. Not to mention I don't know the first thing about creating/managing a Discord server. Though if anyone wants to help, I'll happily accept it :)
That is very fair, I know how to set one up but not how to manage it. Thanks anyways haha, your game has been amazing so far.
Personally, I chose Tiffany lol, everyone is complaining they can't choose multiple girls but it makes the story more immersive. For your first VN, it is somehow the best ive played.. ever
Lol
Gg, absolute legend
this question has probably been asked a hundred times but if you get into a relationship with one girl dose that completely stop all possible relationships with the other girls?
Yes and no. The story is primarily monogamy-focused, but there will be harem options down the line based on relationship/? points.
when is the next update coming
I can't promise a date yet, but it is coming. I give more regular updates on my Patreon if you want to know more!
great game I'm exited to see where this leads and how it ends
well so im in jessica romance and idk how lol cause i even in the question of who you love i placed all the same and someone else for the ghost but well xD guess thats that xDD still i like her cause pokemon so i wont complain uwu
oooh i seee xD
so if i understand well in the walkthrough...the H route will be the harem route? :v xD asking cause i want that jsjs
I keep getting the message "App not installed as package appears to be invaild" on my phone.
I'll look into this, but it might have something to do with the arbitrary limitations most phones put on app size. I'll be releasing a further compressed mobile version of part 1 soon and hopefully that will solve the issue.
I just want to say that the new version of the android app worked for me.
Amazing game, cant wait to see more chapters!
I waited a long time just for the new update but it can't be installed on my phone. Can you make this beautiful game into two parts?
I'm looking into breaking the game up into two parts while I work on chapter 9. I'll probably re-release a slightly more compressed version of the game now as part 1 in the coming weeks, and chapter 9 will be the beginning of part 2.
Thank you for the kind words!
thank you I love this game
Hi! Is there a poly ending in the works? I'm hesitant to play a multi ending eroge VN without a Harem/Poly ending due to a personal issue with indeciciveness.
There is, but like I said in a previous comment, it won't be coming until later in development/story. For the time being, you'll have to choose one LI or none at all.
k, I'll prolly wait till the game is complete. It's nothing against your game as it is, but I just personally don't like having to "pick best girl" in my horny VNs.
I just wanted to say that i loved the game so far. But also, please, learn to compress your game. 4 gb is way to much for this game.
Thank for your the comment, and I agree, 4gb is too much. I have been looking into spliting the game into two parts, as well as further compressing the game, so I hear you.
I didnt play the game yet but the moment you said Zero ntr i was interested now on to a equally important thing is there harem potential here?
There will be a harem route, but there are currently no harem interactions yet. It's going come much later in development/in the story.
Yes alright i wish you good fortune with the game development
Android still has a glitch where the screen is cropped making the game unplayable
Thanks for the report. My emulator isn't catching that but I confirmed it's a problem on phones. I'll try and get a fix out for the public release for chapter 8.
I'm having an issue where I just keep repeating the same few sections, I have not seen new text in a while
Can you describe in more detail? What's repeating, when does it occur?
I'm not entirely certain, but I might've already fixed this issue, and if so, it will be in the next update.
I'm stuck in some form of loop where all the confessions of love are, just around the concert, i'm seeing one section per character
Yeah, I got the same problem, as well.
Does the poltergesit possess the body of any romance options in this game?
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I gotta say, this is actually really good, especially for your first VN. Also, you've definitely mastered Tiff's gremlin faces. They're freaking adorable
Thank you so much! It's been a labor of love, even if I'm terribly inexperienced, lol.
You don't seem Inexperienced you know the way to grab attention even if it does not seem so you show a lot of attentive to detail.
Will there be impreg?
There's currently no plans for it.
Found a minor typo during the tug of war. When it floor 2 vs floor 4, it says the winner is floor 3.
Android version here with a little issue. It doesnt fit the screen and the text lies on top of the images. During our first "session" with Tiffany it switches between full screen and small window.
I didn't realize it was doing this on android versions, my emulations missed that. I'll put out a patch later today.
Thank you!
Can you make it to easy installation app please I really want to play this could you?
I'm still very new to how android releases work, but I will look into this.
Avoidable yuri?
There's one unavoidable kissing scene, but aside from that, all graphic yuri will be avoidable and is planned to remain that way.
i cannot unzip the mac version, it says unabIe to expand it and shows Error 1
Sorry, I'm not familiar with Macs, though I'm sure there's a better place to find out what's wrong.
Well thought and compelling story. You clearly put a lot of effort into this project, and it shows. Looking forward to future chapters!
this ones a lot of fun. cant wait to see where it goes!
This is a very positive story. Too bad it was so short on raie, but the time I spent was good. I hope your project develops well and I will be watching the process. All the best, hope for an imminent update !
Thank you very much!
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Will there be futa?
I'm currently not planning on adding it.
Loved the game! Very fun. Good writing too. I like the character's personalities. I'm already getting attached to them, Hope we'll meet more. Will there be animation? Do you have a patreon page? Thanks for the game!
Thank you! That means a lot!
There reason the scene with Tiffany is not included is because I'm working on custom animated version of it. It should be included with the next update.
I don 't have a Patreon yet, I wanted to get more content out there to make it feel worthwhile for people to invest in my project.
Obligatory when is this coming to android
Once I get more comfortable with the ins and outs of Ren'py (and have significantly more content) I'll make a build for android. Hopefully in a couple of versions from now.